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No, I don't agree.
Of course, I know the meaning of saying that you can't be happy when you're angry.
However, a person can get angry.
So it's important to be able to control your anger, to feel what my real feelings are, and I don't think it's good to say, "If you're angry, you can't be happy during that time."

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Hi Da Hye, 

I just wanted to say I really appreciate your honesty and how you don't agree with the idea that anger and happiness can't mix. Your insight about controlling anger to understand your real feelings is really heartwarming. Keep shining your positive vibes and sharing your wonderful thoughts! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

No, I don't agree. 

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OR>>I disagree. 

Of course, I know the meaning of saying that you can't be happy when you're angry. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Of course, I understand the idea that you can't be happy when you're angry. 

However, a person can get angry. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>However, it's natural for a person to get angry. 

So it's important to be able to control your anger, to feel what my real feelings are, and I don't think it's good to say, "If you're angry, you can't be happy during that time." 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>So, it's important to be able to control your anger and understand your true feelings, and I don't think it's accurate to say, 'If you're angry, you can't be happy during that time.' 

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