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Where do you and your family spend your holidays?

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My family and I usually spend our holidays at home because I think my house is the most cozy place in the world and I can do what I want at home. In fact, we all really enjoy spending time relaxing at home than outdoor. My parents do not make particular plans for holidays. We just eat out in our neighborhood and rest at home. I love it because I feel like I¡¯m the happiest when I¡¯m at home. I think there is nothing like playing games, watching movies or reading books at home during holidays.

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Hi Scott!

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My family and I usually spend our holidays at home because I think my house is the most cozy place in the world and I can do what I want at home. In fact, we all really enjoy spending time relaxing at home than outdoor. My parents do not make particular plans for holidays. We just eat out in our neighborhood and rest at home. I love it because I feel like I¡¯m the happiest when I¡¯m at home. I think there is nothing like playing games, watching movies or reading books at home during holidays.

>> My family and I usually spend our holidays at home because I think my house is the most cozy place in the world and I can do what I want at home. In fact, we all really enjoy spending time relaxing at home than outdoor. My parents do not make particular plans for holidays. We just eat out in our neighborhood and take a rest at home. I love it because I feel like I¡¯m the happiest person when I¡¯m at home. I think nothing beats playing games, watching movies or reading books at home during holidays.
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