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How do you maintain your motivation when you fail?

작성자: 김*경
2023-11-10 2083

회원님의 영작문

It is not easy to pull ourselves together when we fail. But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind. In this situation, I choose to do what I want the most first, to restore my motivation more easily. As you might have expected, I put the last things that I want to do behind.

Besides the order of work, I dream of myself who would change after going through these tasks to get motivated to do it, namely, by telling myself why I need to do it, or what I could have through them.

Lastly, I try to share the results of what I have done or studied with others, such as my wife and children. I love teaching so, just thinking of a chance to teach my children can be a great motivation for me. That’s why I try to organize what I learn through my tasks as much as possible, not just being in a hurry to finish them.

Anyway, know-how to overcome the failure and restart your engine varies. I want to know your tips for getting over failure.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Steve! 
Well done on completing your homework. You've provided a very good and substantial answer. Keep it up! Regarding your question, I would say that I don't easily accept "no" for an answer. I ensure thorough preparation to minimize the chances of failure, and if I do encounter failure, I am determined to succeed on the second attempt. I firmly believe in always giving my best effort!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara

It is not easy to pull ourselves together when we fail. 
>>> CORRECT!
But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind. 
>>> But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind.
In this situation, I choose to do what I want the most first, to restore my motivation more easily. 
>>> CORRECT!
As you might have expected, I put the last things that I want to do behind.
>>> CORRECT!
Besides the order of work, I dream of myself who would change after going through these tasks to get motivated to do it, namely, by telling myself why I need to do it, or what I could have through them.
>>> CORRECT!
Lastly, I try to share the results of what I have done or studied with others, such as my wife and children. 
>>> CORRECT!
I love teaching so, just thinking of a chance to teach my children can be a great motivation for me. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I love teaching, so just the thought of having the opportunity to teach my children can be a great motivation for me.
That’s why I try to organize what I learn through my tasks as much as possible, not just being in a hurry to finish them.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> That's why I make an effort to organize what I learn through my tasks as thoroughly as possible, rather than rushing to finish them.
Anyway, know-how to overcome the failure and restart your engine varies. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Anyway, the know-how to overcome failure and restart one's engine varies.


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