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How do you maintain your motivation when you fail?

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It is not easy to pull ourselves together when we fail. But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind. In this situation, I choose to do what I want the most first, to restore my motivation more easily. As you might have expected, I put the last things that I want to do behind.

Besides the order of work, I dream of myself who would change after going through these tasks to get motivated to do it, namely, by telling myself why I need to do it, or what I could have through them.

Lastly, I try to share the results of what I have done or studied with others, such as my wife and children. I love teaching so, just thinking of a chance to teach my children can be a great motivation for me. That¡¯s why I try to organize what I learn through my tasks as much as possible, not just being in a hurry to finish them.

Anyway, know-how to overcome the failure and restart your engine varies. I want to know your tips for getting over failure.

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Hello Steve! 
Well done on completing your homework. You've provided a very good and substantial answer. Keep it up! Regarding your question, I would say that I don't easily accept "no" for an answer. I ensure thorough preparation to minimize the chances of failure, and if I do encounter failure, I am determined to succeed on the second attempt. I firmly believe in always giving my best effort!
Sincerely,
^^ T. Ara

It is not easy to pull ourselves together when we fail. 
>>> CORRECT!
But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind. 
>>> But there is no other choice but to stand up again to do my best as much as I fall behind.
In this situation, I choose to do what I want the most first, to restore my motivation more easily. 
>>> CORRECT!
As you might have expected, I put the last things that I want to do behind.
>>> CORRECT!
Besides the order of work, I dream of myself who would change after going through these tasks to get motivated to do it, namely, by telling myself why I need to do it, or what I could have through them.
>>> CORRECT!
Lastly, I try to share the results of what I have done or studied with others, such as my wife and children. 
>>> CORRECT!
I love teaching so, just thinking of a chance to teach my children can be a great motivation for me. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> I love teaching, so just the thought of having the opportunity to teach my children can be a great motivation for me.
That¡¯s why I try to organize what I learn through my tasks as much as possible, not just being in a hurry to finish them.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> That's why I make an effort to organize what I learn through my tasks as thoroughly as possible, rather than rushing to finish them.
Anyway, know-how to overcome the failure and restart your engine varies. 
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Anyway, the know-how to overcome failure and restart one's engine varies.


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