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The strength of small change

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I believe that facing the changes in life eventually brings positive effects.
If we focus on the normal life which repeats the same routine, we becomes a person who doesn't invest time for finding a better solution or developing career.
So, if we face the changes during life, even though it is a kind of hard crisis, we will find some ways to handle and have a motivated mindset.
The small changes like clothes, hobby can also refresh mind and affect the whole life.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Your efforts will go a long way!

-Hanna ^^

I believe that facing the changes in life eventually brings positive effects.

>>Correct.
If we focus on the normal life which repeats the same routine, we becomes a person who doesn't invest time for finding a better solution or developing career.

>>If we focus on a normal life which repeats the same routine, we may become individuals who don't invest time in finding better solutions or developing our careers. 

So, if we face the changes during life, even though it is a kind of hard crisis, we will find some ways to handle and have a motivated mindset.

>>So, when we encounter changes, even if they present as challenging crises, we often find ways to handle them and cultivate a motivated mindset.
The small changes like clothes, hobby can also refresh mind and affect the whole life.

>>The small changes like clothes and hobbies can refresh the mind and positively influence our entire lives.

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