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Significance of being capable of speaking in English in hotel industry.

작성자: 정*환
2023-11-10 1817

회원님의 영작문

Hi Chammy.
We were taking about the future this morning.
Even though it was out of topic about the hotel industry, I thought it can be helpful for my interview.
I always wonder what is next question from you and it makes me feel both nervous and exciting.
It is almost your fantastic day.
I hope you have fun with your friends tonight.

Here is the homework below.
Hotels have many chances that foreigners visited and have to make all customers comfortable.
Because most of them are stranger so employees who can speak English can make foreigners at home.
Especially, on emergency, such as losing their passport and being hurt, some actions should be taken immediately with communication in English.
That is the significance of being capable of speaking in English.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Han,
I noticed something in your composition today and yesterday... Remember the difference between talking and taking. I suppose that you intend to use the word "talking" in your piece. ^__^
Thank you for providing your response. Yes, because English is the Universal language, I believe it is very necessary, especially when working in hotels where you can meet people of diverse nationalities.
-Chammy
Hi Chammy.
We were taking about the future this morning.
>>We were talking about the future this morning.
Even though it was out of topic about the hotel industry, I thought it can be helpful for my interview.
>>Even though it was out of topic about the hotel industry, I thought it could be helpful for my interview.
I always wonder what is next question from you and it makes me feel both nervous and exciting.
>>I always wonder what is next question from you and it makes me feel both nervous and excited.
It is almost your fantastic day.
>>Correct
I hope you have fun with your friends tonight.
>>Correct
Here is the homework below.
Hotels have many chances that foreigners visited and have to make all customers comfortable.
>>Hotels have many chances that foreigners visit and have to make all customers comfortable.
OR
>>The hotel industry is one in which foreigners are frequently encountered. Making them feel comfortable is important.
Because most of them are stranger so employees who can speak English can make foreigners at home.
>>Because most of them are strangers, employees who can speak English can make foreigners feel at home.
Especially, on emergency, such as losing their passport and being hurt, some actions should be taken immediately with communication in English.
>>Especially, in an emergency, such as losing their passport and being hurt, some actions should be taken immediately with communication in English.
OR
Particularly in an emergency, like losing one's passport or getting hurt, certain actions should be taken immediately, and one of the most basic ways to communicate with one another is to be able to speak English, which is a universal language. 
That is the significance of being capable of speaking in English.
>>Correct

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