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I introduce our family personality.
First, my mother is warm personality.
Second, my father is intense personality.
Third, my brother is cozy personality.

and last is me.
I have perky personality.

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Happy Friday, Chris! I am grateful for you active participation not just in the class but also in accomplishing your homework. We will just continue with our lesson again next week.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend for now. Have a great weekend! ~ T. Marie ^^

I introduce our family personality.
>> I will introduce my family's personality.
First, my mother is warm personality.
>> First, my mother has warm personality.
Second, my father is intense personality.
>> Second, my father has intense personality.
Third, my brother is cozy personality.
>> Third, my brother has cozy personality.
and last is me.
>> The last one is me.

I have perky personality
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