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My task is our product sell to the buyer.
and general work is overall task related oversea market.
I check e-mail message from potential buyer everyday.
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Hi there, Chris. You were such a great student in our class this week. I appreciate all the effort and hard work you are exerting in our discussion. We will surely keep on doing more activities that will help you enhance your skills and knowledge more. I'll see you in class next time. ~ T. Marie ^^ 
My task is our product sell to the buyer.
>> My task is to sell our product to the buyers.
and general work is overall task related oversea market.
>> My general and overall work is related to overseas market. 
I check e-mail message from potential buyer everyday.
>> I check my email from potential buyers everyday.
It is very important.
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