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right. Laughter is the best medicine. Even if your body hurts or your mind hurts, if you have something to smile about, you will have the strength to overcome it. And when you listen to the testimonies of many cancer patients who have overcome cancer, they smile, have hope in life, and even overcome it.

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Right. Laughter is the best medicine. 
>>>  CORRECT!

Even if your body hurts or your mind hurts, if you have something to smile about, you will have the strength to overcome it. 
>>>  CORRECT!

And when you listen to the testimonies of many cancer patients who have overcome cancer, they smile, have hope in life, and even overcome it.
>>>  CORRECT!
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