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Homework

작성자: 정*환
2023-11-09 1326

회원님의 영작문

Hi Chammy.
I was able to memorize the word "normalize" this morning.
Whenever I talked about future, I got used to speak "release" instead.
For example, the automatic cars will be released in 5 years or it won't be able to released soon because new laws for the traffic are needed.
Now I realized the word "normalize" is useful to say it.
Thank you so much and I won't forget it forever.

Here is the homework below.
First of all, automatic service will be running by robots.
The robots service is already normalized in Japan.
Robots can help customers check-in and check-out.
All customers have to do is just pressing the button so that they can order the food and room service.
Many employees will lose their own job because of automatic system.
Now most of hotels are being managed by manpower however it will be replaced by robots.
That is the hotel industry like in many years from now.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Yay! I'm glad I was able to teach you a new word today... hehe... Your response was good, and I agree that in the future, human labor may be replaced by robots. However, reading your composition makes me sad because, as humans, have you considered our future if we are replaced by robots? hmmm... So I hope you have shared something positive about it like, "On the positive side, it could make human activities easier because there are robots that can do various tasks that were normally done by humans.  ^_^
-Chammy

Hi Chammy.
I was able to memorize the word "normalize" this morning.
>>Correct
Whenever I talked about future, I got used to speak "release" instead.
>>Whenever I talked about the future, I used to say "release" instead.
For example, the automatic cars will be released in 5 years or it won't be able to released soon because new laws for the traffic are needed.
>>For example, the automatic cars will be released in 5 years or they won't be able to release soon because new laws for traffic are needed.
Now I realized the word "normalize" is useful to say it.
>>Now I realize the word "normalize" is useful to say it.
Thank you so much and I won't forget it forever.
>>Correct 
Here is the homework below.
>>Correct
First of all, automatic service will be running by robots.
>>First of all, automatic service will be run by robots.
The robots service is already normalized in Japan.
>>The robot service is already normalized in Japan.
Robots can help customers check-in and check-out.
>>Robots can help customers check in and check out.
All customers have to do is just pressing the button so that they can order the food and room service.
>>All customers have to do is just press the button so that they can order the food and room service.
Many employees will lose their own job because of automatic system.
>>Many employees will lose their jobs because of the automatic system.
Now most of hotels are being managed by manpower however it will be replaced by robots.
>>Now most hotels are being managed by manpower however it will be replaced by robots.
That is the hotel industry like in many years from now.
>>That is what the hotel industry be like many years from now.
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