무료 레벨테스트 받고 강사평가 남기면 1,OOO원 쿠폰 즉시 적립!

혹시 사이트에선 찾지 못한 궁금한 점이 있으세요?
남겨주신 이메일을 통해 답변 드리겠습니다.

문의하신 내용이 문자로 발송되오니
연락처를 남겨주세요.
업무시간 월~금 오전9시~오후6시
(점심시간 낮12시~오후1시)

영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
회원님들께 무료로 제공해드리는 부가 서비스로, 전문 분야를 제외한 자유 주제
또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Homework

작성자: 김*우
2023-11-08 1365

회원님의 영작문

Hi.
How was your flu?
I am sure you are a high profit person in your country, nevertheless, it is not easy for you to see a doctor.
Korea is a blessing country regarding the medical approach.
I hope that your country can have this system soon.
In spite of my day off, today was so hectic.
After our class, I took my kids to their school, and then visited a STARBUGS nearby to buy two coffees for my wife and me.
We had a tea time for a while, and then I met my friend to workout together.
After exercise and sauna, we had a lunch "King don-kat-su". (Maybe you saw this food in the drama "moving".
And, I visited my kids' school, where I watched a small concert of ukulele that students including Irene played.
And, I attended my guitar class and visited a tire shop to replace my tires and visited a shoes shop to buy a new running shoes because old one was broken.
Lastly, my family and I went to a noodle restaurant to have a dinner.
I should play a Nintendo with my kids and my wife soon.
See you.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Dr. Kim!!

My flu was worse today yet, I had a meeting so I went to the golf club and met my clients for a wedding next year. As I was walking, I had some difficulty breathing so I had to adjust my pacing. Perhaps, going to the doctor is not actually my problem but my lack of time to go there due to my schedule. I hope to feel better when I see you in class.

Meanwhile, indeed, your schedule is like a program. It has parts and all of them seem to be a highlight. It was well-balanced and everyone important in your life is involved. I commend you for fractioning your time accordingly to your wife, children, and friend. You are living the life every Wednesday.

How are your new tires? And your new shoes? New things, new beginnings. I hope that your tires keep you safe and the Puma shoes bring you good health.

You must be so proud of Irene! She's got your musical genes.

Since I never played any computer game, I would like to try Nintendo Switch with my son and nephew next time.

I appreciate your time, talent, and excellent work in writing down your journal always. Please go over the grammar pointers.

See you soon!

-T. Donna~

Hi.
>> Correct!

How was your flu?
>> Correct!

I am sure you are a high profit person in your country, nevertheless, it is not easy for you to see a doctor.
>> Correct!

Korea is a blessing country regarding the medical approach.
>> Correct!

I hope that your country can have this system soon.
>> Correct!

In spite of my day off, today was so hectic.
>> Correct!

After our class, I took my kids to their school, and then visited a STARBUGS nearby to buy two coffees for my wife and me.
>> After our class, I took my kids to their school, and then visited a STARBUCKS nearby to buy two cups of coffee for my wife and me.

We had a tea time for a while, and then I met my friend to workout together.
>> Correct!

After exercise and sauna, we had a lunch "King don-kat-su". (Maybe you saw this food in the drama "moving".
>> Correct!
Or: After exercise and sauna, we had "King don-kat-su" for lunch . (Maybe you saw this food in the drama "Moving".

And, I visited my kids' school, where I watched a small concert of ukulele that students including Irene played.
>> And, I visited my kids' school, where I watched a small concert of playing the ukulele of students including Irene.

And, I attended my guitar class and visited a tire shop to replace my tires and visited a shoes shop to buy a new running shoes because old one was broken.
>> And, I attended my guitar class and visited a tire shop to replace my tires and visited a shoes shop to buy a new running shoes because the old one was broken.

Lastly, my family and I went to a noodle restaurant to have a dinner.
>> Correct!
Or: Lastly, my family and I went to a noodle restaurant to have dinner.

I should play a Nintendo with my kids and my wife soon.
>> I should play Nintendo with my kids and my wife soon.

See you.
>> Correct!
번호 제목 글쓴이 공개 상태 등록일 조회수
131097 homework 안*연 완료 2023-09-17 467
131096 Trust needs time 강*율 완료 2023-09-17 4
131095 What makes you want to go to school? 송*우 완료 2023-09-17 383
131094 What are the activities that you may enjoy at the park? 구*우 완료 2023-09-17 1136
131093 What do you love about your city? 구*우 완료 2023-09-17 610
131092 What can you say about your English class at school? 구*우 완료 2023-09-17 495
131091 Do you want to attend an international school? 구*우 완료 2023-09-17 965
131090 Who do people need hobbies? 신*섭 완료 2023-09-17 754
131089 Homework-230915 양*애 완료 2023-09-17 2
131088 Homework 이*화 완료 2023-09-17 694
131087 Today\'s homework 이*도 완료 2023-09-17 513
131086 How do you think you can build a trusting relationship with... 송*하 완료 2023-09-16 944
131085 What’s the worst natural disaster in your opinion? 이*민 완료 2023-09-16 456
131084 Have you ever had any memorable swimming experiences or... 이*윤 완료 2023-09-16 766
131083 How does a computer help us learn and have fun? 김*순 완료 2023-09-15 614
131082 Do you think that parents should have the right to opt their... 김*민 완료 2023-09-15 4
131081 How do people typically unwind and de-stress on Fridays? 에*미 완료 2023-09-15 3
131080 homework 09.15 최*� 완료 2023-09-15 631
131079 Would you rather watch sports or play them? 박*현 완료 2023-09-15 748
131078 Homework 김*서 완료 2023-09-15 2

HOW TO USE IT?

[마이페이지 > 수업 내용 보기 > 학습 캘린더 > 영작교정 버튼 클릭]

수업 횟수만큼 영작교정 게시판이 생성되며,
지난 날짜에도 게시 할 수 있습니다.

주5회 수업 : 월 20회 이용 가능
주3회 수업 : 월 12회 이용 가능
주2회 수업 : 월 08회 이용 가능
01
교정 내용은 최대 1,000byte까지 올릴 수 있습니다.

첨부 파일은 원활한 첨삭을 위한 참고자료로 사용될 뿐,
파일에 대한 첨삭은 불가능 합니다.

업로드 가능한 첨부 파일은 최대 2mb까지이며,
첨부 할 수 있는 파일 형식은 다음과 같습니다.

문서 - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
이미지 - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
전문 분야를 제외한 회원님이 직접 작성한 글만
첨삭이 가능하며,

올려주신 글의 강사님 첨삭은 24시간 이내에
완료 되는 것을 원칙으로 하고 있습니다.
03
하루 게시 가능한 글은 3회까지 이며,
종료된 수업의 영작교정 게시판은
이용이 어려운 점 양해 부탁 드립니다.
04

와이즈에듀케이션아이(주) 사이트명: 파워잉글리쉬 대표이사 전상현
사업자등록번호: 217-81-44736 통신판매신고번호: 2014-서울도봉-0233호
서울본사: 서울시 노원구 한글비석로 245 두타빌 B동 7층 713호
대표번호 1688-8672 개인정보관리 책임자: 안희영 [powerenglish@pweng.net]