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Do you see the advantages of learning new languages? What are they?

We can communicate with foreigner. Thereby We can learn their culture.
Vice versa we can also understand our culture self from seeing their culture.

And learning new languages give refreshment to daily life. None using brain starts to work when we learn the new language.

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Well said, Heather! I am so happy to see your effort to elaborate on your ideas.-Faith-
Do you see the advantages of learning new languages? What are they?
>> 
CORRECT
We can communicate with foreigner. 
>> We can communicate with foreigners. 
Thereby We can learn their culture.
>> Thereby, we can learn about their cultures.
Vice versa we can also understand our culture self from seeing their culture.
>> Likewise, we can also understand our own culture from seeing their cultures.
And learning new languages give refreshment to daily life. 
>> Learning new languages can give refreshments to one's daily life. 
None using brain starts to work when we learn the new language.
>> Our brains start to work when we learn a new language.
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