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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Which would / do you prefer – snowboarding or skiing?

I like snowboarding more.
Actually, I don't well good at control skiing and snowboarding.
I don't think I have the ability.
And when I feel scared doing skiing or boarding, I can't control my speed and keep falling.
But snowboarding was more fun than skiing.
Because snowboarders looks attractive when they ride a board.
Before the ride snowboarding I thought I could copy them, but I can't
The level of difficulty was too difficult to me.
Because, the snowboard both foot are bind to the board, it makes me difficult to balance the body.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Which would / do you prefer – snowboarding or skiing?


I like snowboarding more.
>> CORRECT!
Actually, I don't well good at control skiing and snowboarding.
>> Actually, I am not good at skiing and snowboarding.
I don't think I have the ability.
>> CORRECT!
And when I feel scared doing skiing or boarding, I can't control my speed and keep falling.
>> CORRECT!
But snowboarding was more fun than skiing.
>> CORRECT!
Because snowboarders looks attractive when they ride a board.
>> Because snowboarders look attractive when they ride a board.
Before the ride snowboarding I thought I could copy them, but I can't
>> Before riding the snowboard, I thought I could copy them, but I can't.
The level of difficulty was too difficult to me.
>> It was too difficult for me.
OR >> The level of difficulty was too high for me.
Because, the snowboard both foot are bind to the board, it makes me difficult to balance the body.
>> Because, in the snowboard, both feet are bound to the board; it is difficult for me to keep my balance.
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