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A role of press

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Press freedom is very important since press have a role of representing the opinion of the weak in society.
Press can help public to have a critical mind by publishing the reality of peole who was isolated from society.
But, these days, there are some criticisms that press represents and advocates the rich rather than the poor.
The people who is included in press company should behave with the mind of vocation and deliver the fact based on evidence.
They should contribute to make well-informed citizenry by using some tools, because there are many platforms like SNS, application which can deliver information to public.

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Thank you for your homework, Yu Jin!

Your efforts will go a long way!

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Press freedom is very important since press have a role of representing the opinion of the weak in society.

>>Press freedom is very important since press has a role of representing the opinion of the weak in society.
Press can help public to have a critical mind by publishing the reality of peole who was isolated from society.

>>Press can help the public to have a critical mind by publishing the reality of people who were isolated from the society.

But, these days, there are some criticisms that press represents and advocates the rich rather than the poor.

>>Correct.
The people who is included in press company should behave with the mind of vocation and deliver the fact based on evidence.

>>People who are part of the press should have a mind of vocation and deliver the fact based on evidences.

They should contribute to make well-informed citizenry by using some tools, because there are many platforms like SNS, application which can deliver information to public.

>>They should contribute to creating a well-informed citizenry by utilizing various tools, as there are numerous platforms, such as social media and applications, that can deliver information to the public.

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