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How important do you think is family ties and relations in your country?

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The modes of family have changed easy and convenient.
It is still important for living.
Because we live to centre around parent and child.
The size of families is smaller than the past. But the relationship is closer.

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Thank you for this Ms. Aruna!

The modes of family have changed easy and convenient.
>>> The relations among families have changed to easy and convenient.  
It is still important for living. 
Because we live to centre around parent and child.
>>> OR: It is still important for living because we deem parent and child as the center of human relations. 
The size of families is smaller than the past. 
>>>  correct 
But the relationship is closer.
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