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Of all the places you¡¯ve visited, which would you recommend to your friends?
I will recommend bluemoutain in Australia to my friends.
Bluemountain is beautiful landscape.
The grass and trees are very bright green color so my eyes feel relaxed.
And Australia air is very clean so easy to breathe.

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Hello Lokky,
Job well done! You did well with your homework today. Have a great day! See you later :)
~ T. Demi ^^

I will recommend bluemoutain in Australia to my friends.
>> I will recommend the Blue Moutain in Australia to my friends.
Bluemountain is beautiful landscape.
>> Blue Mountain is a beautiful landscape.
The grass and trees are very bright green color so my eyes feel relaxed.
>> 
The grass and trees have a vivid green color that makes my eyes feel relaxed.
And Australia air is very clean so easy to breathe.
>>  
The air in Australia is remarkably clean, making it easy to breathe.
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