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My best 10km running time was 50 minutes in 2023 May. I didn't expect that time I wanted to be under 56 minutes but I was good condition and It was nice weather. I got a good score. I hope to get under 50min.

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Hello, Thomas!

Nothing is impossible. What your mind thinks you can do, you can. So, if you clock in less than 50 minutes within your 10 kilometer run next time, it needs some discipline and practice. Most of all, it needs a lot of passion for the run.

Below, read my suggestions and take a look at the patterns I have suggested. You did great!

See you then.

-T. Donna~

My best 10km running time was 50 minutes in 2023 May. 
>> Correct!

I didn't expect that time I wanted to be under 56 minutes but I was good condition and It was nice weather. 
>> I didn't expect that time but I wanted to be under 56 minutes but I was in good condition and it was a nice weather. 

I got a good score.
>> Correct!

 I hope to get under 50min.
>>  I hope to get under 50 minutes.
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