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What kinds of preparations do you do whenever the season changes in your country?

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Generally, I prepare check the my closet whenever the season changes.
then, I search place in the Korea for picnic for season.

Additionally, Department store (Cloth store) is ready for sale in advance two months ago.

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Good day to you, Chris! As always, I am always thankful with your participation in the class, as well as your dedication in doing your homework diligently. We will surely keep on doing lessons and activities to help you improve the quality of your sentences even better. See you again in class! ~ T. Marie ^^ 
Generally, I prepare check the my closet whenever the season changes.
>> Generally, I prepare by checking my closet whenever the season changes. 
then, I search place in the Korea for picnic for season.
>> Then, since it's season for picnic, I search for places in Korea where I can go. 
Additionally, Department store (Cloth store) is ready for sale in advance two months ago.
>> Additionally, the clothes in department stores have been on sale in advanced at least two months ago. 
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