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People can¡¯t express by language when they are born.
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relationship.
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I think it means importance of relationship
and it could be developed the world such as present.

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Good day, Sunny!
In Science, there is what we call communication between a mother and a child. Did you know that when a baby is still in its mother's womb, it already responds to the sound that it hears outside? Language is already developed. That is the mystery of life. When it comes to the second language, we learn it by constant practice and being exposed to people who often use it. Fighting! 
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People can¡¯t express by language when they are born.
>>> People can¡¯t express themselves by language when they are born.

They need communication to maintain the relationship.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> They need to communicate to establish the relationship.

So they creativeted their language that they promised.
>>> So they created the language that they promised.

I think it means importance of relationship
>>> I think it means the importance of a relationship

and it could be developed the world such as present.
>>> and it could be developed the world such as the present.
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