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I am half in favor of and half against the content of the proverb.

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I think it's important what kind of discussion it is and who you discuss with.
I think it is a very pleasant and different experience to discuss with people who can understand new perspectives while recognizing various opinions, which is consistent with the meaning of the proverb.
However, I don't think it will be a good experience for me if the other person only insists on his or her opinion and proceeds without listening to others.
Therefore, I am half in favor of and half against the content of the proverb.

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Hi Da Hye,

You've presented a well-balanced perspective on the proverb, highlighting the importance of the type of discussion and the individuals involved. Your explanation regarding the value of open-minded and constructive discussions is insightful. It's clear that you believe the quality of the conversation matters. Your mixed feelings about the proverb are understandable, as it depends on the circumstances. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

 ~Teacher Cathy

 

I think it's important what kind of discussion it is and who you discuss with.

>>I think it's important what kind of discussion it is and who you discuss it with.

I think it is a very pleasant and different experience to discuss with people who can understand new perspectives while recognizing various opinions, which is consistent with the meaning of the proverb.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I find it to be a very pleasant and enlightening experience to engage in discussions with people who can embrace new perspectives and appreciate diverse opinions. This aligns with the essence of the proverb.

However, I don't think it will be a good experience for me if the other person only insists on his or her opinion and proceeds without listening to others.

>>CORRECT

OR>>However, I don't believe it would be a positive experience for me if the other person insists solely on their opinion and proceeds without considering or listening to others.

Therefore, I am half in favor of and half against the content of the proverb.

>>CORRECT

OR>>Hence, I find myself both in agreement and in disagreement with the message of the proverb.

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