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I don\'t think I\'m going to ask questions because homeless people are uncomfortable.

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Actually, I don't think I'm going to ask questions because homeless people are uncomfortable.
This is because homeless people think they will take money using questions as an excuse.
And I don't want to stay close to them because I'm disappointed that they gave up their future for whatever reason.

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Hi Da Hye,

You've shared your perspective on not asking questions when interacting with homeless people, and you've provided reasons for your decision. It's important to be sensitive and considerate towards others, and your honesty is appreciated.

~Teacher Cathy

 

Actually, I don't think I'm going to ask questions because homeless people are uncomfortable.

>>Actually, I don¡¯t think I¡¯m going to ask them questions because they might get uncomfortable.

This is because homeless people think they will take money using questions as an excuse.

>>They may worry that I'm asking for money, and I don't want to put them in that position.

And I don't want to stay close to them because I'm disappointed that they gave up their future for whatever reason.

>>I also prefer to keep my distance because it's disheartening to see individuals who've given up their future for various reasons.

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