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2023-11-01 1998

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Q: Are whales important in marine ecology? Why do you think so?
A: I think whales are important in marine ecology.
I think it's because blue whales eat the plankton under the ocean, and that makes the marine ecology safe.
Also, if the predators are gone, the marine ecology will be destroyed.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I think whales are important in marine ecology.
>>CORRECT!

2. I think it's because blue whales eat the plankton under the ocean, and that makes the marine ecology safe.
>>I think it's because blue whales eat planktons under the ocean, and that makes the marine ecology safe and balanced.

3. Also, if the predators are gone, the marine ecology will be destroyed.
>>CORRECT!
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