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It was such a beneficial time today. Thanks for my first English teacher.
Even though, I\'m not truly fluent in English.
So, I'll be ready for next class and enhancing higher in the near future.
See you the day after tomorrow.

Homework for today:
That's a bummer. I haven't ever visit any countries.
Therefore, I find the next year study-abroad would be my first-time traveling.
I hope to make a lot of friends, enjoy the lifestyle there.

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Good afternoon, Delbin. It's my pleasure to help! Let's have a great week. See you on Friday! 
~T. Jade^^
It was such a beneficial time today. 
>> Correct
Thanks for my first English teacher.
>> Thanks to my first English teacher.
Even though I'm not truly fluent in English.
>> Correct
So, I'll be ready for next class and enhancing higher in the near future.
>> So, I'll be ready for the next class and aim to improve further in the near future.
See you the day after tomorrow.
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