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I go to piano class to piano academy 2or three times a week. I learned turkish march, and many songs like flower dance. Nowadays, I'm learning a new one however, it is really complicated so I don't want to play it. Some time piano class is really fun however, sometime it is really bad. So my mind is saying that you don¡®t need to go to piano academy and I really want that

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Hello Jude, good day to you! Thank you for again for sending me your composition. I love it when you share about your daily experiences. It is good that you enjoy playing the piano. you are also learning how to play different songs. We will talk more in class. Have a wonderful day. I will see you then! ~T. Lyn
I go to piano class to piano academy 2or three times a week. 
>>I go to piano lessons twice or thrice a week.
I learned turkish march, and many songs like flower dance. 
>>I learned the Turkish march and I also learned a lot of songs like the flower dance.
Nowadays, I'm learning a new one however, it is really complicated so I don't want to play it. 
>>I'm learning something new these days, but it's so complicated that I don't want to play it.
Some time piano class is really fun however, sometime it is really bad.
>>Sometimes piano lessons are really fun, but other times they're really bad.
So my mind is saying that you don¡®t need to go to piano academy and I really want that
>>So my mind is thinking that I don't need to go to piano lessons but I have to.
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