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A gadget that I don\'t use

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A gadget that I don't use is DSLR camera. I bought it 2010 and I used it until 2014. It was too heavy and not that good convince. Actually I didn't like pictures with that camera. It was so realistic. So I even have it until now I don't use it.

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Good day, Thomas!

Technology has evolved in many different ways throughout history. Arguably for cameras, the most profound impact of digital photography was the proliferation of picture taking and picture sharing.

You are right. Why would people want a high resolution cameras when they want to hide their flaws and imperfections?

Hence, applications are here to stay even when the DSLR cameras are gone.

Thank you for the very good answer you gave below. Study the grammar pointers I gave you.

See you then!

-T. Donna~

A gadget that I don't use is DSLR camera. 
>>  A gadget that I don't use is the DSLR camera. 

I bought it 2010 and I used it until 2014. 
>> I bought it in 2010 and I used it until 2014. 

It was too heavy and not that good convince. 
>> It was too heavy and not that good convincing.
 
Actually I didn't like pictures with that camera. 
>> Correct!

It was so realistic. 
>> Correct!

So I even have it until now I don't use it.
>> So I even have it until now that I don't use it.
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