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I was surprised with your tricky question this morning.
Actually I knww the meaning of encourage.
Even though I understood what the sentence means, I asked myself "Have you ever stop people from working in the hotel industry?
After knowing the answer exactly, I decided that I have to make my mind to be changed and think differently, honestly but not nagatively.

Here's the homework as below.
I have no any options to encourage someone from working in the hotel industry and also never done that.
Each person has their own choice for their life.
If someone asked me about lifes in the hotel, I would absouletely tell them good points and bad points in order that they can make a choice easily.

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To be honest, your response surprised me. I wasn't expecting such a positive response from you. It was well said, in my opinion. However, since you have stated it, I hope you have provided at least a single advantage and disadvantage. 

-Chammy

I was surprised with your tricky question this morning.

>> I was surprised by your tricky question this morning.

Actually I knww the meaning of encourage.

>> Actually, I know the meaning of the word ¡°encourage¡±.

Even though I understood what the sentence means, I asked myself "Have you ever stop people from working in the hotel industry?

>> Even though I understood what the sentence meant, I asked myself "Have you ever stopped people from working in the hotel industry?

After knowing the answer exactly, I decided that I have to make my mind to be changed and think differently, honestly but not nagatively.

>> After knowing the answer exactly, I decided that I had to make up my mind to change and think differently, honestly but not negatively.

Here's the homework as below.

>> Here's the homework below.

I have no any options to encourage someone from working in the hotel industry and also never done that.

>>I have no option to encourage someone to work in the hotel industry and also never done that.

Each person has their own choice for their life.

>>Correct

If someone asked me about lifes in the hotel, I would absouletely tell them good points and bad points in order that they can make a choice easily.

>> If someone asked me about life in the hotel, I would absolutely tell them good points and bad points in order that they can make a choice easily.

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