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im always request without hate food in delivery.
Using delivery i just one request without cucumber.
i really hate cucumber. if my request not accepted , im just throw it trash.

In any restaurant, im not complaining anything.
If any request, just do it. but do not complain.
but next time never again this restaurant.
Honestly really this restaurant good taste, could be again.

In my personality, usally do not say complain at outside store.
So, my friends who speak for me , because they do konw me well

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Thank you for this Ji An!

im always request without hate food in delivery.
>> I always request to exclude the food I hate when ordering food delivery. 
Using delivery i just one request without cucumber.
>> Using food delivery,  I just have request which is to have it without cucumber.  
i really hate cucumber. 
>>  correct 
if my request not accepted , im just throw it trash.
>>  If my request was not followed, I just throw it in the trash.
In any restaurant, im not complaining anything.
>>  In any restaurant, I do not complain about anything.
If any request, just do it. 
but do not complain.
>>   If I have a request, I just do it but I do not complain.
but next time never again this restaurant.
>>  However, I will never go there again next time.
Honestly really this restaurant good taste, could be again.
>> Honestly, if this restaurant serves really good tasting food, I might go there again. 
In my personality, usally do not say complain at outside store.
>> Based on my personality, I usually do not say any complaint outside the store.
So, my friends who speak for me , because they do konw me well
>>  So my friends would usually speak for me because they do know me well.
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