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> Instead of asking Ms. Arthur to resign, what do you think the school should have done about the is

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I think the school should have protected Ms. Arthur instead of asked her to resign.

I guess the principal and the superintendent might be conservative and old-fashioned people who can not read the present.
She is the one who is a victim to protect.

This could be a chance for the school to have guidelines for how teachers and students protect themselves.
There are many possibility to face this kind of situation in the future.
All schools might never want anybody to be a victim or a criminal at their school. They have duties to educate the young generation to be the member of society. And the young generation make the future. The school taught that the society is not a fair place by this happening.

Most Korean also consider our teacher group as very conservative group. I felt what happening in the world is similar each other.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Ms. Tina!

I think the school should have protected Ms. Arthur instead of asked her to resign.
>>>   I think the school should have protected Ms. Arthur instead of asking her to resign.
I guess the principal and the superintendent might be conservative and old-fashioned people who can not read the present.
>>> correct  
She is the one who is a victim to protect.
>>> correct  
>>> OR: She is the victim who should be protected.
This could be a chance for the school to have guidelines for how teachers and students protect themselves.
>>> This could be a chance for the school to have guidelines on how teachers and students can protect themselves.  
There are many possibility to face this kind of situation in the future.
>>> correct     
>>> OR: There are many possibility to face this kind of similar situation in the future.
All schools might never want anybody to be a victim or a criminal at their school. 
>>>  correct      
They have duties to educate the young generation to be the member of society. 
>>>  They have duties to educate the young generation to be a good member of society.  
And the young generation make the future. 
>>> correct    
The school taught that the society is not a fair place by this happening.
>>> The school taught that the society is not a fair place with this incident. 
Most Korean also consider our teacher group as very conservative group. 
>>> Most Koreans also consider our teacher group as a very conservative one.   
I felt what happening in the world is similar each other.
>>>  I felt that what's happening in the world are similar to each other. 
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