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To be honest, I don't imagine my next date. I think I should live alone. It must be more happy.

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Good morning, Thomas!

For now, being alone and making yourself better is the best thing to do. When you are ready and the time is right, dating will be a breeze and everything will be alright.

Thanks for your homework answer. The comparative form of the adjective 'happy' is 'happier'. You may not be as happy right now, but you are wiser than before.

See you!

-T. Donna~

To be honest, I don't imagine my next date. 
>> Correct!

I think I should live alone. 
>> Correct!

It must be more happy.
>> It must be happier.
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