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2023-10-26 2002

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Hello, T.Donna.
It's already a deep night.
How was your day?
Regarding my clinic, there was nothing special.
Did I tell you about Dr.MJ's recent stance?
One week ago, many staff told us that they wanted to resign because of Dr. MJ's anger.
Thus, Dr. MJ decided to have a kind word and behavior.
As all we know, it's impossible for him to keep this attitude, neverthless, he tried to keep this promise for 1 week.
Hence, he had a hard time lately.
I had a bothersome stomachache all day.
Maybe, reflux esophagitis is getting worse.
So, I prescribed a drug by myself and took it.
Meanwhile, Dr.MJ and I talked about the dentist on upper floor at lunch.
I told that he was so wierd, and Dr.MJ agreed with it and told me that he might do a drug.
Drug is a main interest recently in Korea.
Regarding my homework, my daughters, especially first daughter Irene, have a good concentration skill.
When Irene is reading a book, she even can't hear any sound including mom's call.
How about your son?
See you.

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Hello, Dr. Kim!

Thank you for accomplishing your homework in spite of a long day of work at the middle of a deep dark night.

We can say that Dr. MJ is always someone special in your clinic. Every once in a while, he can blurt out his frustration or annoyance and this hurts your staff. I am thinking that it is actually the main reason why staff leave. In a company, no matter how big or small the salary they receive, for as long as they are happy, complimented, and valued, they will never leave. Well, you can always welcome a new staff but there is only one Dr. MJ. 

I hope that your reflux esophagitis will be alright before your trip to Jeju Island. I heard that black pig is one delicacy in that beautiful place. Other than that, there are a lot of food and places to go there so you have to be healthy all the way to enjoy.

As you said, dealing with gangsters is not a joke. If you irk them, they may be violent. Always watch your back.

We all have our special skills. All of your daughters will have theirs revealed as time goes by. The focus of Irene, the artistic skill or Rachel, and the pretty face of Maegan are all gifts you passed down to them along with your wife. As for my son, he learned to play the drums by himself, he is keen in Math, and can watch and play with his phone for the whole day! ^^ I dread the last one.

Study the grammar comments carefully below and note down the important structures. Your new vocabulary as well as innovative sentences add up to the interesting exposition of your essay. Excellent job as always!

See you again next week!

-T. Donna~

Hello, T.Donna.
>> Correct!

It's already a deep night.
>> It's already deep at night.

How was your day?
>> Correct!

Regarding my clinic, there was nothing special.
>> Correct!

Did I tell you about Dr.MJ's recent stance?
>> Correct! Very good sentence!

One week ago, many staff told us that they wanted to resign because of Dr. MJ's anger.
>> Correct!

Thus, Dr. MJ decided to have a kind word and behavior.
>> Correct!
Or: Thus, Dr. MJ decided to have kind words and behavior.

As all we know, it's impossible for him to keep this attitude, neverthless, he tried to keep this promise for 1 week.
>> Correct!
Or: nevertheless; one week

Hence, he had a hard time lately.
>> Correct!

I had a bothersome stomachache all day.
>> Correct!

Maybe, reflux esophagitis is getting worse.
>> Correct!
Or: Maybe, my reflux esophagitis is getting worse.

So, I prescribed a drug by myself and took it.
>> Correct!
Or: So, I prescribed a drug to myself and took it.

Meanwhile, Dr.MJ and I talked about the dentist on upper floor at lunch.
>> Meanwhile, Dr.MJ and I talked about the dentist on the upper floor at lunch.

I told that he was so wierd, and Dr.MJ agreed with it and told me that he might do a drug.
>> I told that he was so weird, and Dr.MJ agreed with it and told me that he might be doing drugs.

Drug is a main interest recently in Korea.
>> Drugs is the main interest recently in Korea.
Or: Drugs is the main interest in Korea recently.

Regarding my homework, my daughters, especially first daughter Irene, have a good concentration skill.
>> Regarding my homework, my daughters, especially the first- Irene, have a good concentration skill.

When Irene is reading a book, she even can't hear any sound including mom's call.
>> When Irene is reading a book, she even can't hear any sound including her mom's call.

How about your son?
>> Correct!

See you.
>> Correct!
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