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What\'s your best experience in your recent visit to Singapore?

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My best experience in my visit to Singapore was swimming for hours at the roof top swimming pool in Marina bay sands hotel. It was actually beyond wonderful and it was incredible when I watch the city view from the swimming pool. I didn't think it was very good when I look at the view on the ground but It was unbelievable and amazing when I watch it at the top of the hotel swimming. Especially It was getting dark, I was so happy to swim seeing the beautiful scenery and I felt like I was in cyberpunk city or New York city.

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Hi Scott!

Thank you for doing your homework ^^ You did very well with your sentences!

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My best experience in my visit to Singapore was swimming for hours at the roof top swimming pool in Marina bay sands hotel. It was actually beyond wonderful and it was incredible when I watch the city view from the swimming pool. I didn't think it was very good when I look at the view on the ground but It was unbelievable and amazing when I watch it at the top of the hotel swimming. Especially It was getting dark, I was so happy to swim seeing the beautiful scenery and I felt like I was in cyberpunk city or New York city.

>> My best experience in my visit to Singapore was swimming for hours at the roof top swimming pool in Marina Bay sands hotel. It was actually beyond wonderful and it was incredible when I watch the city view from the swimming pool. I didn't think it was very good when I look at the view on the ground but It was unbelievable and amazing when I watch it at the top of the hotel swimming pool especially when it got dark, I was so happy to swim seeing the beautiful scenery and I felt like I was in cyberpunk city or New York city.
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