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When I feel like something is wrong, I stop and think from the beginning. Determine where and how things went wrong and decide whether to continue or start over.

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Good morning, Eliana!
It's good for people to pause and think especially if they have done something that makes others or even them inconvenient. Remember that people who acknowledge their mistakes are the strong and successful ones because they know where to start all over again. Have a great day!
Aki~

When I feel like something is wrong, I stop and think from the beginning.
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Determine where and how things went wrong and decide whether to continue or start over
>>> CORRECT!

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