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Does your philosophy in life relate to your career or your personal life more?

작성자: 이*윤
2023-10-25 390

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I think my philosophy in life is more related to my own personal life.
My philosophy in life is a very short and famous idion : "I can do it, just do it." and "No pain, no gain."
The sentence "I can do it." is simple but very strong and impressed. It gives me high self-esteem.
The sentence "Just do it." is brand Nike's slogan, and I was so moved that I remembered it until now.
I think it's better to combine my two favorite sentences and make them into one philosophy in life, so I've been using them until now.
"No pain, no gain." is what my mother told me.
In the old days, I thought too much and was easily hurt, and I cried when I couldn't solve it.
Whenever I was crying, my mother said, "Sweet baby, crying doesn't solve the difficult anythings right now. No pain, no gain. Give it a bump. I'll give you power."
When I heard this, I changed into a completely different person.
Now, I stand up for myself and become very strong myself.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun! Your philosophy in life seems to be more about personal growth and resilience. It's great that these simple but powerful sayings have had a positive impact on your self-esteem and how you handle challenges. Keep using them to stay strong and confident in both your personal and professional lives. Well done with the homework, Yun! See you in class this Friday. 
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Does your philosophy in life relate to your career or your personal life more?
I think my philosophy in life is more related to my own personal life.
>> Correct
My philosophy in life is a very short and famous idion : "I can do it, just do it." and "No pain, no gain."
>> My philosophy in life is a very short and famous idiom : "I can do it, just do it." and "No pain, no gain."
The sentence "I can do it." is simple but very strong and impressed. 
>> Correct
It gives me high self-esteem.
>> Correct
The sentence "Just do it." is brand Nike's slogan, and I was so moved that I remembered it until now.
>> Correct
I think it's better to combine my two favorite sentences and make them into one philosophy in life, so I've been using them until now.
>> Correct
"No pain, no gain." is what my mother told me.
>> Correct
In the old days, I thought too much and was easily hurt, and I cried when I couldn't solve it.
>> Correct
Whenever I was crying, my mother said, "Sweet baby, crying doesn't solve the difficult anythings right now. No pain, no gain. Give it a bump. I'll give you power."
>> Whenever I was crying, my mother said, "Sweet baby, crying doesn't solve difficult things right now. No pain, no gain. Give it a bump. I'll give you power."
When I heard this, I changed into a completely different person.
>> Correct
Now, I stand up for myself and become very strong myself.
>> Correct
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