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Tour is important for both personal life and county.

Tour itself could be encourage to give good energy and refreshment to tired people.

Tourism is also an essential factor in reviving the economy of country and each province.

So every province are developing attractive tour area competitively.

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Thank you for your homework, Lily!

Practice makes progress so just keep going!

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Tour is important for both personal life and county.

>>Tours are important for both personal life and a country. 

Tour itself could be encourage to give good energy and refreshment to tired people.

>>Going on a tour can provide a much-needed boost of positive energy and refreshment for tired individuals.
Tourism is also an essential factor in reviving the economy of country and each province.

> Tourism is also an essential factor in reviving a country's economy and each province within it.
So every province are developing attractive tour area competitively.

>>So every province is developing attractive tourist destinations competitively.

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