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> Do you agree that hand written letters are considered more meaningful these days compared to a tex

작성자: 이*희
2023-10-23 2720

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I couldn't agree more.

We can literally do everything with smartphones, even meals, grocery shopping, clothe shopping, etc at any time.
Writing a letter takes a lot of effort,
First of all, I have to buy a paper that I can hardly buy through the online shop. This is because online shops usually sell in large batches.
I might be afraid to spend more money than I expected to.
So I have to get out of the house to buy letters and come back.
Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after finish writing.
The post office runs from 9 o'clock to 6 o'clock. I should go there during business hours.
Hand-writing is also a big burden to me. My handwriting is a mess because I don't use my handwriting these days.

How can not I admit written letter are more meaningful?

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Ms. Tina. Some people just don't appreciate the sentimental value in hand written letters. Some might even see it as a cheap gift. I agree with you though, there is so much effort given in writing a letter. 

I couldn't agree more.
>>> correct   
We can literally do everything with smartphones, even meals, grocery shopping, clothe shopping, etc at any time.
>>>  We can literally do everything with smartphones, even order meals, grocery shopping, clothes shopping, etc. at any time. 
Writing a letter takes a lot of effort,
>>>  correct   
First of all, I have to buy a paper that I can hardly buy through the online shop. 
>>>   correct  
>>> OR: First of all, I have to buy a piece of paper that I hardly can buy through the online shop. 
This is because online shops usually sell in large batches.
>>>  correct   
>>> OR:  This is because online shops usually sell in bulks. [ "in  bulk" = (especially of goods) in large quantities, usually at a reduced price]
I might be afraid to spend more money than I expected to.
>>> correct    
>>> OR: I might not be willing to spend more money than I want to. 
So I have to get out of the house to buy letters and come back.
>>> OR: So I have to get out of the house to buy at the stationary store and come back. 
Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after finish writing.
>>> Finally, I have to get out of the house to go to the post office after I finished writing it.  
The post office runs from 9 o'clock to 6 o'clock. 
>>> correct     
I should go there during business hours.
>>> correct     
Hand-writing is also a big burden to me. 
>>> correct      
My handwriting is a mess because I don't use my handwriting these days.
>>> OR: My handwriting is a mess because I don't get to practice it these days.  
How can not I admit written letter are more meaningful?
>>> How can I not admit that written letters are more meaningful?  
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