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WRITING TASK: What do you enjoy doing with your cousins?

I enjoy eating delicious food with my cousins and we talk about how we live recently.

I love my first aunt(mother's sister).

She always supports me.

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You and your cousins must be really close, Melody! This kind of relationship is hard to maintain, so may you always find time to hang out with each other. Also, you are fortunate that you have a special bonding with your aunt. Unfortunately, I am not closed with my mother's siblings because they are already old. Take care!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What do you enjoy doing with your cousins?
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I enjoy eating delicious food with my cousins and we talk about how we live recently.
>> I enjoy eating delicious food with my cousins, and we talk about how we live recently.
I love my first aunt(mother's sister).
>> I love my first aunt, my mother's sister.
OR I love my maternal aunt.
She always supports me.
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