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The reason why I need to acquire the hotel certificate is because it is my challenge.
Getting the certificate is definitely not easy I know.
I don't desire something anybody can get easily.
This is my third time for those challenges.
Whenever I challenge them, I made it anyway even though it took so long time.
I would like to enjoy the success to get it this time and continue to work in the hotel with the certificate.
This is my favorite proverb.
No pain No gain.


Chammy,
You seemed like you wonder how wonderful our hotel is.
Here is the link for you.
www.msgh.kr
Have a nice weekend.
Han.

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Hello Han,

You¡¯re so unbelievable reading your input makes me wonder, "What?!". Hehe, just kidding. Although not everyone enjoys challenges, I think they make us all stronger and more resilient. However, in your situation, you are creating your own challenges in life, even though I think there is a deeper reason why you need to get that certificate. Of course, your credentials will benefit from it.

-Chammy
The reason why I need to acquire the hotel certificate is because it is my challenge.

>>Correct
Getting the certificate is definitely not easy I know.

>>Correct
I don't desire something anybody can get easily.

>>Correct
This is my third time for those challenges.

>>Correct
Whenever I challenge them, I made it anyway even though it took so long time.

>> Whenever I challenge them, I make it anyway even though it takes so long time.

OR

>> Whenever I am challenged, I make it anyway even though it takes me a long time.
I would like to enjoy the success to get it this time and continue to work in the hotel with the certificate.

>> I would like to enjoy the success of getting it this time and continue to work in the hotel with the certificate.
This is my favorite proverb, No pain No gain.

>>Correct
Chammy,
You seemed like you wonder how wonderful our hotel is.

>> It seemed like you wondered how wonderful our hotel is.
Here is the link for you.
www.msgh.kr
Have a nice weekend.
Han.

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