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2023-10-19 2184

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Q: How do you feel about people who are always late?
A: I actually feel about people who are always late nothing when it's in school.
But when it comes to my promises, it's okay with my friends, but if the person is someone who I don't know much, I feel bad.
It's because if the person has no reason with that, it means he doesn't respect me.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I actually feel about people who are always late nothing when it's in school.
>>I actually feel nothing about people who are always late when it's in school.

2. But when it comes to my promises, it's okay with my friends, but if the person is someone who I don't know much, I feel bad.
>>When it comes to my promises, it's also okay with my friends. However, if the person is someone whom I don't know much, I feel bad.

3. It's because if the person has no reason with that, it means he doesn't respect me.
>>It's because if the person has no reason to be late but is still late, then it means that he doesn't respect me.
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