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Saving water, reducing disposable products, and using public transportation

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I think we should save water because we use nature as much as we need.
Disposable products have a harmful effect on nature, such as trees and plastics, so it is recommended to reduce wood or discarded plastic by reducing paper or plastic disposable products.
Lastly, I think that using public transportation generates even a little less exhaust gas in everyday life.

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Hello Da Hye,

Your focus on saving water, reducing disposable products, and using public transportation is commendable. Your reasoning for conserving water by considering our dependence on nature is insightful. Understanding the harmful effects of disposable products on nature and advocating for their reduction is a positive step. Additionally, your support for public transportation as a means to reduce exhaust gas aligns with sustainable living practices.

~Teacher Cathy


I think we should save water because we use nature as much as we need.

>>I believe we should conserve water since we rely on nature for our needs.

Disposable products have a harmful effect on nature, such as trees and plastics, so it is recommended to reduce wood or discarded plastic by reducing paper or plastic disposable products.

>>Disposable products, like paper and plastic, have harmful effects on nature. To mitigate this impact, it is advisable to reduce the use of wood and plastic by minimizing the use of disposable paper and plastic products.

Lastly, I think that using public transportation generates even a little less exhaust gas in everyday life.

>>Finally, I believe that opting for public transportation can contribute, even if only slightly, to reducing exhaust emissions in our daily lives.

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