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If we consider sustainable future, we try to reduce of plasric usage expecially big country like as America and China.

Ther are two directions to reduce plastic usage as the change of policy ane people's perception.

Policy should be raise up plastic's price.

We need to change eople's perception to reduce of plastic use as education and social movement.

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Your hard work will surely pay off!

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If we consider sustainable future, we try to reduce of plasric usage expecially big country like as America and China.

>>If we consider a sustainable future, we should make efforts to reduce plastic usage, especially in big countries like America and China. 
Ther are two directions to reduce plastic usage as the change of policy ane people's perception.

>>There are two directions to reduce plastic usage: changes in policy and people's perception.
Policy should be raise up plastic's price.

>>Policies should aim to increase the price of plastic.
We need to change eople's perception to reduce of plastic use as education and social movement.

>>We also need to change people's perception regarding plastic use through education and social movements.


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