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WRITING TASK: What is the best place to go hiking in your country?

The best place to go hiking is Seoraksan.

I've been there in 17 years old to participate in school camp.

It's 1,708m.

We left at 1p.m. by bus and started to go hiking at 5p.m.

It was hard but meaningful experience to make patience.

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Wow! You had a wonderful experience, Melody! I heard that it is the third highest mountain in your country. You must be proud of yourself for successfully reaching its peak.-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What is the best place to go hiking in your country?
>> CORRECT
The best place to go hiking is Seoraksan.
>> CORRECT
I've been there in 17 years old to participate in school camp.
>> I was there when I was 17 years old to participate in a school camp.
It's 1,708m.
>> CORRECT
OR Its height is 1,708m.
We left at 1p.m. by bus and started to go hiking at 5p.m.
>> We left at 1 p.m. by bus and started to go hiking at 5 p.m.
It was hard but meaningful experience to make patience.
>> It was hard but a meaningful experience to develop patience.
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