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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Is there anything stressful about Christmas?

In my case, I have not experienced stressed about Christmas yet.
I don't know why, most people looks to feel good at the end of the year season.
Maybe they are looking forward to the new year.
I'm also too looking forward to.
At the Christmas or year-end in Korea, we spend time with close friends or lovers.
Sometimes we meet friends living far away.
We eat the food, party, or travel with them.
So, I think I'm don't get stressed in this kinds of day.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Is there anything stressful about Christmas?


In my case, I have not experienced stressed about Christmas yet.
>> In my case, I have not experienced being stressed about Christmas yet.
I don't know why, most people looks to feel good at the end of the year season.
>> I don't know why, but most people want to look and feel good at the end of the year.
Maybe they are looking forward to the new year.
>> CORRECT!
I'm also too looking forward to.
>> I'm also looking forward to it.
At the Christmas or year-end in Korea, we spend time with close friends or lovers.
>> CORRECT!
Sometimes we meet friends living far away.
>> CORRECT!
We eat the food, party, or travel with them.
>> CORRECT!
So, I think I'm don't get stressed in this kinds of day.
>> So, I think I don't get stressed with this kind of day.

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