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Do you think people from your country are superstitious?

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2023-10-17 1979

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Well, I believe there are people who believe it or don't do it. Also, most of people want to trust the only good things that could effect to themselves. For me, same as them. I tend to believe the only good superstitious for myself.

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Well, I believe there are people who believe it or don't do it. 
>> Well, I believe there are people who believe in it, or don't do it. 
Also, most of people want to trust the only good things that could effect to themselves. 
>> Also, most people want to trust the only good things that could affect themselves. 
For me, same as them. 
>> CORRECT!
I tend to believe the only good superstitious for myself.
>> I tend to believe the only good superstitious beliefs for myself.
OR >> I tend to believe the only good superstitions for myself.


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