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What steps are you currently taking to work towards your five-year goals?

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I keep studying to become an expert in computer engineering and artificial intelligence.
The computer industry and artificial intelligence are developing so rapidly that a lot of information is pouring out. I have to keep studying in order to acquire the latest information and skills.
Also, I am trying to get a computer certificate to learn practical skills. I passed the written test and am preparing for the practical test. I'm setting a goal to get a certificate before the end of this year.
Lastly, there is a coding test at the company's join stage, so I am working hard to be able to code confidently without forgetting computer language.

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Hi, Yun! That's some serious dedication! Keep it up, and you'll achieve your goals in computer engineering and AI. It's inspiring to see your perseverance as well. You are undoubtedly an ambitious person with a bright future ahead of you. Thanks for this. See you in class!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: What steps are you currently taking to work towards your five-year goals?
I keep studying to become an expert in computer engineering and artificial intelligence.
>> Correct
The computer industry and artificial intelligence are developing so rapidly that a lot of information is pouring out. 
>> Correct
I have to keep studying in order to acquire the latest information and skills.
>> Correct
Also, I am trying to get a computer certificate to learn practical skills. 
>> Correct
>> OR: Additionally, I am pursuing a computer certificate to acquire practical skills.
I passed the written test and am preparing for the practical test. 
>> Correct
I'm setting a goal to get a certificate before the end of this year.
>> Correct
Lastly, there is a coding test at the company's join stage, so I am working hard to be able to code confidently without forgetting computer language.
>> Lastly, there is a coding test during the company's recruitment process, so I am working hard to code confidently without forgetting the computer language.
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