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What daily activities help you to be creative?

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2023-10-16 1881

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Actually, I have no activities to be creative. But a week ago, I started to growing a plant basil.
It already sprout and I proud of it. As soon as I wake up, I see how growing up it is. It makes me expect everyday and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

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Good evening, Hyebhin!^^

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.

It may seem insignificant, but the simple act of making your bed sets the tone for the rest of your day. With those lovely sheets and pillows in place, you'll have done your first task and given yourself a sense of accomplishment. And the daily habit will set in motion a chain reaction of other minor accomplishments throughout the day.

Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


Actually, I have no activities to be creative. But a week ago, I started to growing a plant basil.
>>> Actually, I have no activities to be creative. But a week ago, I started growing basil.
It already sprout and I proud of it. As soon as I wake up, I see how growing up it is.
>>> It has already sprouted, and I am proud of it. As soon as I wake up, I check how big it has grown.
>>> OR: It has already sprouted, and I am pleased. I check how big it has gotten as soon as I wake up.
It makes me expect everyday and gives me a sense of accomplishment.
>>> It makes me expect every day and gives me a sense of accomplishment.
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