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Hello, T. Donna.
This is a peaceful Monday.
I couldn't attend your class for a long time as if I had a long holiday.
Last sister of my wife lives near my house and she reserved a restaurant just in front of my house to celebrate her baby's first birthday.
That's why all families of my wife gathered in my house.
I ordered king crab, raw fish, and shrimp and we ate all of those together last Saturday, of course with my whiskey.
I was so tired that night, nevertheless, I had to go to Karaoke with brother-in-law because he really wanted to go there.
We ate a sumptuous food in a korean traditional type restaurant yesterday.
My wife's parent slept in my room last night, so I couldn't join the class this morning as well.
Since my wife prepared many things for her families, she got a cold.
Fortunately, my shinges is almost gone.
Regarding my homework,
Yes, I have a good talent about language skills.
People around me and even I agree with it.
I think you have it, too.
See you tomorrow.

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Good evening, Dr. Kim!

It feels like ages since we last met in class. I have seen that you enrolled for seven months and chose the original class time. Thank you very much for doing so.

Family time is precious. When you can attend these kinds of gathering you have to go there by all means. It simply implies that you are there and you play a part of being a good husband, father, brother-in-law, and a relative to your wife's family.

Your food sounds like a feast! In spite of the water from Fukushima, your penchant to seafoods is evident on your table. I cannot blame you. A seafood platter is one of the best in the world.

I hope that your wife will recuperate quickly. Last week, I remember that she was sick again. She needs some rest and vitamins.

Truly, the gift of language is one skill and talent that is needed in daily life. We can negotiate and get what we want by the use of language. The ability to persuade and influence is carried in the language so always hone yours to assist you at work and your life in general.

Your mastery in grammar and overall English skills is apparent in your writing. Carry on with excellence!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

Hello, T. Donna.
>> Correct!

This is a peaceful Monday.
>> Correct!

I couldn't attend your class for a long time as if I had a long holiday.
>> Correct!

Last sister of my wife lives near my house and she reserved a restaurant just in front of my house to celebrate her baby's first birthday.
>> The last sister of my wife lives near my house and she reserved a restaurant just in front of my house to celebrate her baby's first birthday.

That's why all families of my wife gathered in my house.
>> That's why all the family members of my wife gathered in my house.

I ordered king crab, raw fish, and shrimp and we ate all of those together last Saturday, of course with my whiskey.
>> Correct!

I was so tired that night, nevertheless, I had to go to Karaoke with brother-in-law because he really wanted to go there.
>> I was so tired that night, nevertheless, I had to go to Karaoke with my brother-in-law because he really wanted to go there.

We ate a sumptuous food in a korean traditional type restaurant yesterday.
>> We ate sumptuous food in a Korean traditional type of restaurant yesterday.

My wife's parent slept in my room last night, so I couldn't join the class this morning as well.
>> Correct!

Since my wife prepared many things for her families, she got a cold.
>> Correct!

Fortunately, my shinges is almost gone.
>> Correct!

Regarding my homework,
Yes, I have a good talent about language skills.
>> Regarding my homework, yes, I have a good talent (about/ in) language skills.

People around me and even I agree with it.
>> Correct!

I think you have it, too.
>> Correct!

See you tomorrow.
>> Correct!
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