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Q. Imagine you invent a new kind of car in the future. What does it look like?
A. I invent a flying car. It has a bis wings and small tires like airplanes.
It can sits two people and we'll not drive flying cars .Also we don't need to buy airplane ticket!

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Hi Ann~!^^ Good morning to you! It's Monday again! Don't be intimidated by what you don't know. That can be your greatest strength and ensure that you do things differently from everyone else!
"Life has no limitations, except the ones you make." 
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
A. I invent a flying car.
>>> I will invent a flying car.
 It has a bis wings and small tires like airplanes.
>>>  It has big wings and small tires like airplanes.
It can sits two people and we'll not drive flying cars.
>>> It could accommodate two people and it does not need someone to navigate the plane. 
Also we don't need to buy airplane ticket!
>>> CORRECT~!^^
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