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What do people in your country collect? It is case by case. Someone likes to collect shoes. Particularly, men collect shoes. Someone likes to collect makeups. Also, people like to collect figures.

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Hi, Justin. Thank you so much for taking your time to do your homework. I appreciate it so much. Keep up the good work and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
It is case by case.
>> Correct
Someone likes to collect shoes.
>> Some people like to collect shoes. 
Particularly, men collect shoes.
>>In particular, men collect shoes. 
Someone likes to collect makeups.
>> Someone likes to collect makeup
Also, people like to collect figures.
>> Additionally, people enjoy collecting figures.
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