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Have you ever experienced a \"once-in-a-lifetime\" event? What was it?

작성자: 이*윤
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Unfortunately, I never experienced a "once-in-a-lifetime" event before.
However, there is most memorable event. It happened two month ago on my birthday.
The wireless earphones I was using were getting old, so I was paying attention to the "Buds" earphones from Samsung.
I expressed my desire to have it to my parents and younger brother, but I wanted to get a job and buy it with my own money, so I kept window shopping.
But on my birthday, a package that I didn't order was delivered, and when I opened it, I found out that the Buds earphones I wanted were purchased in my favorite color.
Later, I found out that my parents and younger brother collected money and bought the earphones they wanted for my birthday and gave them to me as a surprise gift.
I was so surprised by the unexpected situation, and I was so happy. It was the most touching birthday present I have ever received and I could feel the love of my family.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun! What a heartwarming story! Family surprises can be truly special and memorable. It's clear your family cares about you deeply. Thanks for this. See you again in class~
~T. Jade^^
Homework: Have you ever experienced a "once-in-a-lifetime" event? What was it?
Unfortunately, I never experienced a "once-in-a-lifetime" event before.
>> Correct
However, there is most memorable event. 
>> Correct
It happened two month ago on my birthday.
>> It happened two months ago on my birthday.
The wireless earphones I was using were getting old, so I was paying attention to the "Buds" earphones from Samsung.
>> Correct
I expressed my desire to have it to my parents and younger brother, but I wanted to get a job and buy it with my own money, so I kept window shopping.
>> I told my parents and younger brother that I really wanted it, but I wanted to work and save up money to buy it myself, so I just kept looking at it in the store windows.
But on my birthday, a package that I didn't order was delivered, and when I opened it, I found out that the Buds earphones I wanted were purchased in my favorite color.
>> Correct
Later, I found out that my parents and younger brother collected money and bought the earphones they wanted for my birthday and gave them to me as a surprise gift.
>> Correct
I was so surprised by the unexpected situation, and I was so happy.
>> Correct
It was the most touching birthday present I have ever received and I could feel the love of my family.
>> Correct
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