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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What unusual food would you like to try?

If I try new food, it's a big adventure to me.
Because, I am sensitive to food.
When I eat the food, I'm sensitive to the smell, texture, and taste of food,
But these days, I'm try to various foods.
Someday, I'm going to try "Hongeo-Hoe" (skate sashimi), it's one of Korea's foods.
Hongeo is a kind of skate.
We make it sashimi and eat it fermentation.
This food shape looks like a regular sashimi.
But, this food is always in the top five stinky foods of the world.
That's why it's most difficult foods to challenge.
Some people said that if you had a stuffy nose, and eat the skate sashimi, this food's smell
will cure your stuffy nose.

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Good day, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What unusual food would you like to try?


If I try new food, it's a big adventure to me.
>> If I try new food, it's a big adventure for me.
Because, I am sensitive to food.
>> Because, I am sensitive to food that are unfamiliar to me.
When I eat the food, I'm sensitive to the smell, texture, and taste of food.
>> CORRECT!
But these days, I'm try to various foods.
>> But these days, I try eating various food.
Someday, I'm going to try "Hongeo-Hoe" (skate sashimi), it's one of Korea's foods.
>> CORRECT!
Hongeo is a kind of skate.
>> CORRECT!
We make it sashimi and eat it fermentation.
>> We eat it raw or we ferment it.
This food shape looks like a regular sashimi.
>> This food's shape looks like a regular sashimi.
But, this food is always in the top five stinky foods of the world.
>> CORRECT!
That's why it's most difficult foods to challenge.
>> That's why it's the most challenging one to eat.
Some people said that if you had a stuffy nose, and eat the skate sashimi, this food's smell
will cure your stuffy nose.
>> CORRECT!

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